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A poem entitled: Spurrier
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A poem entitled: Spurrier


Jul 26, 2013, 2:50 PM

Losers are Red, garnet and black.
They ride on coat tails and live in a shack.

They’ll pump in your gas,
Then smoke some more grass.

Go c0cks! They will yell.
As their sent off to jail.

Their visors thrown down,
as their sacked like a Clown.

A lifetime in Orange awaits them inside.
Like a roach in the light;
they have nowhere to hide.

Gone is the day their thumb brought them hope.
Now they live on, clinching the soap.

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Not bad...your rhyming structure is inconsistent...


Jul 26, 2013, 2:54 PM

And you use "their" when you mean "they're". Overall...B-minus.

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Grammar is my


Jul 26, 2013, 3:05 PM

biggest weakness. I am an engineer, and so I don't pretend to be a grammar wizard. I just wanted to share some artistic expression during my down time.

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Grammer police***


Jul 26, 2013, 3:09 PM



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In the voice of Sir Charles Barkley ... "That's turrible."***


Jul 26, 2013, 3:36 PM



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