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Topic: Front Page Story: First and Orange - Tuesday edition
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Posted: Dec 31, 2013 1:51 PM
 

Love your articles, but you should hire me as your editor. I see close to this many edits in almost every article...

1. “First of Orange” - should be “First and Orange”.
2. “…faced in the Big Ten.” - missing quotations at end of paragraph.
3. “…a lot of fun.” – missing quotations at end of paragraph.
4. “…to stop people.” – missing quotations at end of paragraph.
5. “…Kenny Guyton the offense… “ - missing comma after “Guyton”.
6. “…wants to break the Orange Bowl rushing the record or 206 yards…” – the word “the” should be deleted.
7. “…record or 206 yards…” – the word “or” should be “of”.
8. “…beating 226…” – either 206 or 226 is a typo or Hyde is wrong.
9. “…when I was you know…” – missing comma after “was”.
10. “…Black Cats.” – missing quotations at end of paragraph.
11. “…very good good, productive working relationship.” – either one “good” too many or repeated by Herman?
12. “…very good good, productive working relationship.” – missing comma after “good” if not repeated by Herman.
13. “…very good good, productive working relationship.” – missing comma after “productive”.

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